I know often you just want to read and not comment, but I am curious as to whether the fluidly-shifting viewpoint in the last post of Tyromos worked for you.
Incidentally, I want to bring Tyromos out as an ebook. I haven't talked to Shirley about this yet but I can't imagine she wouldn't go along. I probably don't need to say it will have a flying scene on the cover. Maybe the two of them on the upper curve of a moyoshaushau (loop-de-loop), possibly flying united, if you catch my drift.
In other patron-specific news, I think for this month's premium content I will post some portion of what I wrote for the Novel Marathon, tentatively titled The Dawn-Flower Cave but with edits. For those who do not know, it is Artira's story. Concluding chapter of Tyromos coming.